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Post by JAXX on Sept 23, 2010 16:17:14 GMT -5
this is just a sample of the new plot that i want to put into effect since this one doesn't seem to be working so well. : ( And since i want your guy's opinions, just reply back with wether or not you like it and/or any changes that would make it better
Welcome to Jasper Falls, a quiet sleepy little town in Illinois where everything has been the same since it's establishment. Always this quiet town has been... well that. Quiet. Until now.
It happened almost seven years ago when a young local girl went missing. Three days later, her body was found. The police were calling it a animal attack, but the townsfolk suspect foul play. What kind of animal leaves a body intact, but drains all the blood? The only creatures around Jasper Falls that could do that are wolves, bears and pumas, but they don't kill like that. Or maybe there is something else. There have been rumors of other creatures running around in the night. Someone swore they saw a bull the other day.
Little do the the inhabitants of Jasper Falls know, but evil has infested their little town, living among them. Some of them have been their since the beginning, and others have just arrived. Creatures from nightmares and legends have taken up residents in this little village. Why? No one knows. All they know is that something is wrong in the little village.
Can you survive in Jasper Falls?
If you didn't understand that, the plot is that of a supernatural town.
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Post by nixin on Sept 23, 2010 21:05:01 GMT -5
looks good to me.
but what kind of supernatural creatures?
vampires or something?
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Post by JAXX on Sept 23, 2010 21:37:50 GMT -5
yea. basically vampires werewolves and shifters, plus humans and maybe a few slayers or too |
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Post by kimberly on Sept 23, 2010 22:28:01 GMT -5
Oooh. Vampire Diaries come to mind, with the town council in on the secret of vampires but not the other supernatural beings.
Yep. -nods- Kim likes it.  |
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Post by JAXX on Sept 23, 2010 22:35:38 GMT -5
That's basically the jist of it, just that only the hunters would know about them.
so if everyone agrees, then i'm going to go ahead and make the changes (which are barely any). what i need you guys to do it just change you character's species to the one you want on your application and then history if needed be. |
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